I get that you're trying to go for the whole Cards Against Humanity sort of addition there, however, if 40% of your testers are getting put off by...
@Maikel Yarimizu I'm in agreement with @TravisBach here. This seems pretty on-brand and while it's not my cup of tea when it comes to blurbs,...
So this is kid's literature? It seems very (non-german) fairytale-esque. Depends on who your audience is, to me, I can't see this jiving with most...
Do you mean irreverent?
I don't really know much about conversational blurbs and I haven't done humor in a while, but I'll give it a swing. That start is weak, imo....
I never actually noticed this, oops :p damn spoilers, lol... 112 words, coming right up XD They just wanted a moment’s peace. Instead, they found...
Those look good, but Landry's name is going to look awful small in the amazon thumbnail, and while it's a personal thing, with TDR I've never been...
Not sure if it's just me, but this blurb rubs me the wrong way. It feels to me more like a press release than anything else. It feels extremely...
The "in the last two years" seems a bit unnecessary of a starting point. Second sentence seems overly wordy. Breq's name is repeated too much as...
This is good, if I had to make one change, which is more personal - it would be to terminate the blurb with the party: With the PVE servers...
Yeah, even Asimov who is wildly optimistic for scifi can be a total downer at times
PM-ed you
