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    Blurb Critique Thread

    I'm writing a new book and this is the blurb; James' day has finally come: to slay the Reapers' beasts, climb up the ranks and clean his father's...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Nov 15, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    [10/30/19] A Necromancer's Revenge; Awakening

    Thank you!
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 31, 2019 in forum: 2019 LitRPG Books
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    [10/30/19] A Necromancer's Revenge; Awakening

    Hello everyone. I just released my first novel. It's a Wuxia/Xianxia novel mixed with Japanese mythology. More than 120,000 words....
    Thread by: Austin Andrews, Oct 30, 2019, 2 replies, in forum: 2019 LitRPG Books
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thnak you! I hope it goes well
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 21, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you so much for your help. I'll be using the first one. The "for every death takes its toll and, if he fails, (...)" I'll be publishing the...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 19, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you! We're getting somewhere, definitely haha. I thought about "as every death" but the "as" is already used in that sentence. "for" might...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 9, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you! I changed "ahead of him now" to "ahead is now", and what if I changed the 2nd and 3rd to something like this... Seventeen-year-old Jin...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 7, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    That's an amazing exercise. I might have to try it sometime. What did you think of my last blurb? I'm still unsure. Thank you :)
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Oct 2, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Hi everyone. I've been finishing the book and I'm back to tweaking the blurb. What do you think of this? I cut a few sentences and information....
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Sep 24, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you! I didn't add the burning the village to the ground because I think using the word "fire" is already enough. Jin he's also not a fan of...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Aug 31, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Hi everyone. Thanks for all the help. I made a few changes. The book is called Awakening (The Necromancer's Revenge book 1). I added the part...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Aug 29, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    No problem, that actually sounds even better
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Aug 18, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you! I made a few changes. What do you think of this? Seventeen-year-old Jin enjoys a peaceful life… until Kaji School descends upon his...
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Aug 16, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress
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    Blurb Critique Thread

    Thank you! Writing a blurb seems harder than writing the book itself
    Post by: Austin Andrews, Aug 13, 2019 in forum: Works in Progress