oh wow thats like portal but without portals
Really solid although i think you should change the city/ships color to either more lavender or a different color as is the color feels like...
Neeewts I think the author was thinking of newts when he made lizard men which is still inexcusable i mean atleast do the basic reserch to learn...
he could be using it in a legal way trademark law is weird so its entirely possible he's fine although im no expert.
well there are technicaly a few stats in the book but there not done through stat windows the matters definitely up for debate but i call SAM soft...
Honestly from the way i read it Dakotas problem seemed to be more with student debt after all they were essentially forced to obey the academy...
Apperently for most books its about 150wpm although with litrpg from my experience as there are lots of pauses while reading stats i wouldent be...
The sad part is that wouldent even be a plothole if the town was just under the rule of a larger kingdom rather then a city state and so they were...
I like mana pools BUT most authors in LitRPG dont seem to understand how to do mana pools. Mana pools arent banks the entire point is that they...
I think you perhaps unintentionaly make an important point here inorder to mature a genre must be able to incorporate most feelings or "scales" if...
what does it matter if authors confuse grog and ale there not that different right? ;P
Since you used previously in your last blurb I suggest you dont use it in your next it will just seem repetitive.
Some people are going to be extra doubtfull when your writeing about there subject field in this case its important to either abandon them or try...
So what ive found is best is rather then do morality do a seriousness scale or a grittyness scale. If its light it usualy wont be moraly dark and...
Oh wow that might be the first ever LitRPG ive heard of where the MCs are selfless almost all the others they are doing what there doing for fun...