Hi everyone. I have two blurbs for a gamelit harem novel. I'd appreciate any help James' day has finally come: to slay the Reapers' beast, climb...
Thank you :)
Thank you! And thank you for the help in strengthening the blurb.
Hi. There is a bit of rewriting but those 100 pages dif it's mostly because I didn't link the paperback to the e-book version on the portuguese...
Hello everyone. I just released my debut novel. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07N2DWSN6 Blurb; When Alec was 15, he was forced to accept an...
It looks amazing. I'll be seeing how the book goes and I might tweak it a bit
Thank you! That's amazing. Truth be said, there's not much about the reapers (that most people know of). People just know they have powers but...
Parents tell their sons about the Reapers. No one knows who they truly are or what they end goal is. Stories are shared about Reapers killing and...
Would something like this work? "Known for several homicides and kidnapping they are looking for (...)" "Known by what they do but not by who...
Should I just keep the infamous part? and delete the "of whom little is known" ?
There are reports about what they do (killing and kidnapping) but besides that, there's not much more No one knows who they are or the true...
Thank you Would something like ... "The infamous murderers, of whom little is known, are looking for two very special students and a letter that...
Maybe I could change it to "He was hoping to survive first term without lighting too many things on fire but ends up having trouble more trouble...
Should I change the second part then?
Thank you. I made a few edits. What do you think? When Alec was a kid, he was forced to accept an implant made by the gods - a chip that granted...
Hello everyone. I'm back at it again. I made a few changes using the help I got previously. When Alec turned fifteen, he was forced to accept an...
Exactly. It's more soft litrpg/gamelit than litrpg
Hello everyone. I hope you're having a good day. I posted my story's prologue a week ago. Today I finally posted the first chapter. I wouldn't...
Thank you! I might do a few changes before publishing it
Hi everyone. I made a few changes on my blurb. Which one would be better? 1) When Alec turned fifteen, he was forced to accept the government's...