[04/20/18] Login Accepted - Incipere Online Book One

For him, it's give up his family and live on knowing he'll never see them again outside of one off chance or die surrounded by those he loves in his final hours... that's a little wordy though for the ad though

 

Hmmm. That's difficult.
I mean you could leave it like that. I'm from a traditional background and there stakes mean everything. So my view of blurbs and taglines is probably a bit different.
It's not bad, it just raised a question for me, that's all.

 

I just wish I had more letters to work with. I'm terrible at compressing work.

 

Yep. It's worse than a blurb. I think the computers should just be able to scan the book and come up with the best possible ad. WHY ARE AIs SO BEHIND IN THE REAL WORLD?!

 

Because of Google not letting their AI's talk to each other the way they want to.

 

how about leave Earth and his loved ones behind forever or remain a paralyzed husk, incapable of living a full and normal life.

 

Hmm, maybe... I could somehow work that in.

 

Just started reading it - @33% quite fun.

 

That’s great. Don’t forget to review it! I needs them. The precious.

 

I will. Unless it's 33% fun - 67% suck. But I'm expecting more like >90% fun. so odds are good. (I review most books I like) as of now I'm at 242 (2*11^2) reviews. you'll be #243. (3^5).

 

For me, it's 100% fun. Book two is 98% fun, and 2% anguish tears.

 

Read and reviewed. Guess you'll see it when amazon approves.

 

I'm a bit behind but I'll be done soon!

Edit: Done and reviewed! Looking forward to book two!

 

It’s being edited as we speak. I’ll give you a more thorough response in private (because spoilers )

 

Alright, just figured I'd post here. Next Friday, the 25th, is International Geek Day and Towel Day! As such, I'm putting Login Accepted on Sale for 47% off to 2.99 because it doesn't like the price at 50% off for some reason. The sale runs all Geek Weekend until 11PM Sunday night.

Enjoy!