[07/11/17] Nagant Wars: The Pawn's Sacrifice (Book 2)

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  1. Jayden

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    Nagant Wars: The Pawn's Sacrifice

    I'd love some feedback if anyone has any....

    Formatting?
    Writing style?
    Good, bad, ugly?

    I love multiple POV. I know some people don't. I've tried to have a balance of characters, but I also realize now that some of the fan favorites are single POV OP MCs.

    Thoughts?
     
    Jayden, Jul 14, 2017
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    Congrats on the launch! ;)
     
    Paul Bellow, Jul 14, 2017
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    Your reviews disappear??
     
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