Alerons Web Comic of The Land.

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  1. Andrew Lynas

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    That might just be away to compare The Land and it's Moons to Earths size? But you might be right. But also of you look closely you will actually see TWO Earth like planets (continent appearance wise), a big Land one and a Small one, the small one appears to have lots of junk and wreckage floating around it, space junk or bits of a broken moon?
     
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    Caught in a Landslide.
     
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    Free Episode 3 of The Land Comic ->> LitRPG

    7 is up on Patreon.
     
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    Well I won’t be getting it. He makes to many promises and brakes them all too much to make my pay roll.
     
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    Then read the Free Chapters when they are posted here ->> LitRPG
     
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    No escape from reality.
     
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    Free Episode 4 of Comic here -->> LitRPG
     
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    My eyes, they burn!!

    Whoever wrote Aleron's page should be dragged and quartered ;) That code is an unreadable, unmaintainable abomination, with an endless wall of styling set right into the html.


    Great chapter though. The comic is answering a lot of questions.
     
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    I find the comic to be great. Visual mediums are perfect for this story. The problem is, he is taking forever releasing them and each chapter barely progresses the plot. I haven’t looked but do the comic episodes match the book chapters? Because at this pace it will be 2023 before the first book worth of comics are released.
     
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    Well to be fair, he can't really control the Artist's rate of production, especially considering that it's not made by a big production group.
     
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    good point. I think I’m more referring to the pacing of the story. It feels really drawn out. The plot could be advanced with fewer pictures, IMO.
     
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    So you want less content?
     
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    yeah that is clearly not what I’m getting at. Taking 50 pictures to advance 5 pages of content feels like bad pacing. This is hyperbole to emphasize my point. It isn’t more content if it’s just fluff. Don’t use 10 words when 5 will do. Don’t use 10 pictures when 5 will do.
     
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