Since Ghosts of Smoke is finished, I figured I might as well find a way to get at least more than one one-star review ready for Amazon. Just express your interest in it and I'll PM you the link.
Is Ghosts of Smoke supposed to be a standalone or a part of a series? Just curious about what criteria you have for your advanced reviews.
Standalone. Not a complete standalone— the universe will be reused in other stories— but this character's arc starts on page 4 and ends on page 233. I'm mainly looking for opinions as to whether the story is functional. If the character arc works, if it's actually litRPG/gamelit, if it's a good story at all. Simple stuff rather than anything really mechanical.