Blurb Critique Thread

Discussion in 'Works in Progress' started by Paul Bellow, Aug 18, 2017.

  1. Maikel Yarimizu

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    OK, looking to re-launch ye olde paperback collection this month, and I feel the need to work on the blurb. This is the old one:

    Once upon a time, a niece asked her uncle to manage a fantasy game for her and her friends. The girls had no idea how to play; the uncle had no idea what he was getting into. So in a warm and cozy little pizzeria, five young ladies roll their dice, and in a world of their imagination five princesses have to deal with the consequences. The adventure may not always make the most sense, but that never stopped a good game. Let the fun begin!

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    Unfortunately, I tend to dither and fail at blurbing for my own stuff, and I tend to err on the side of conciseness.
     
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