WIP BOOST: Tower of Gates Book 5

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  1. Paul Bellow

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    Talked to designer about cover...found a possible model...Will update once the cover is done...very broad strokes outline done...
     
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    This is written - was book 4, but it's now book 5. Heh.

    I think changing it up will make the series a bit stronger as each of books 4,5, and 6 will be from a single POV of one of the main characters, starting with Josh, then Eric, then Sarah.

    This is in second-draft stage currently.
     
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    Adding a prologue, reading again, and adding a chapter toward the end after the climax. Then off to the dev editor team.

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    Spoiler-no-spoiler...
     
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    Might change the title of this one. Will know after the next read-through is complete.

    Grind.
     
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    Sent to first editor...
     
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    First edit nearing completion... Hopefully before I get done with editing Roguelike...
     
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    Got the first edit back. Starting a read-through to fix problems before sending to final editor...
     
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    Even the Dead Trees are Coming to Life!



    Eric and and company search for Sarah on level one-three while also dealing with epic and overwhelming hordes of undead. With tougher mobs comes better loot, but our group needs to be on their toes as they fight to survive. Every battle brings them closer to uncovering an unsettling truth about the Tower of Gates. Will escape ever be possible?
     
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