Hey there, Some of you may have already read the rough draft and second draft on RRL, which was first posted Nov 2015. Working on my plug for it. I'm publishing soon. So this is to both discuss the new and old... I guess. Your thoughts? War is coming. The government must accelerate their super soldier program. They have pushed beyond what was thought possible and developed a new Virtual Reality system; the perfect tool to weed out and train recruits. Against all odds, Lucius, a semipro gamer, is selected to participate in Codename: Freedom, a VRMMO that promises to blur the lines between game and reality. With the world watching live, Lucius is faced with the opportunity to gain a following and impressing sponsors. Unlike normal games that start out easy as you learn to play them, Codename: Freedom doesn’t have that luxury. There is no time to waste. After years of hard work to rise in rank, this new game will challenge Lucius to the point of breaking and beyond. Will he quit, go mad, or become something altogether different? Something better?