WIP Core Punk

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  1. Paul Bellow

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    Never started a thread! Working on editing. I've got adverbs and passive verbs under check, but sticky sentences get me every time...

    pwastats.JPG

    New cover is coming along thanks to @Viergacht ... can't wait to see it...

    After another go-through, I'll stick it in Scrivener and get the ARCs sent out to look for other oopsies...

    Tightened up the game mechanics a bit as well as some other problems...
     
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    Is ProWritingAid an app or did it come with the software? ^^
     
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    It's a plugin. I paid $45/year, I believe.
     
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    Think I finally worked out how to make the game mechanics more important/essential in the first half of the book and tie it to the end of the book. Finally! Heh.

    Overall, I think the extra polish will be worth it. Just a couple more minor fixes, and it's ready to go. Should have the new cover soon too.
     
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    ARCs went out today...finally!
     
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    Cover reveal. Thanks, @Viergacht! Another homerun!

    corepunk-small.jpg
     
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    You're very welcome!
     
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    I like this better than the first. What is the font name?
     
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    Did you get the ARC okay?
     
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    Um, no. How did you distribute them?
     
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    It's a modified version of Buick Grunge. I liked it because it had a futuristic yet tribal vibe that seemed to fit the setting.
     
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    Thanks!
     
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