WIP Core Punk

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  1. Paul Bellow

    Paul Bellow Forum Game Master Staff Member Shop Owner LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    Never started a thread! Working on editing. I've got adverbs and passive verbs under check, but sticky sentences get me every time...

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    New cover is coming along thanks to @Viergacht ... can't wait to see it...

    After another go-through, I'll stick it in Scrivener and get the ARCs sent out to look for other oopsies...

    Tightened up the game mechanics a bit as well as some other problems...
     
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    Is ProWritingAid an app or did it come with the software? ^^
     
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    It's a plugin. I paid $45/year, I believe.
     
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