WIP Hero: Tower of Gates Book Three

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    Oh my. Story surprised me tonight. In a good way. This about wraps up the first three books or the first act of the first twelve book arc! Yay.

    Just dropped a big, "Oh, now that makes more sense..." bit.

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    FIRST DRAFT IS DONE!

    Yay.

    Now onto editing...

    Boo.

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    This needs to get to the substantive / developmental editor soon. It shouldn't need too many changes at this point. Will read through one more time to make sure all the characters (and the plot) are on track after changes to the first two books.

    I plan to launch this one May 15th - about 2 weeks after the first two drop.
     
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    Finished adding 5k. Off to First Editor.

    Back to a final polish on book 2.
     
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    It's back from the first dev edit. I'm making changes then off to final editor.
     
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    About halfway through my changes after the dev edit. Then off to the final editor.

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    Approving final edits then off to the formatters. Cutting it close!
     
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    Tougher Mobs. Deeper Dungeons. Better Loot.

    Eric and Sarah venture into level one-two of the Tower of Gates, determined to escape or at least survive. They begin to uncover some secrets - why dwarves aren't a playable race any longer - while unraveling even bigger mysteries. Can they defeat the black dragon (or even find it) and clear the zone? Or will they succumb to all the dark forces working against them?
     
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    Tougher Mobs. Deeper Dungeons. Better Loot.

    Eric and Sarah venture into Level One-Two of the Tower of Gates, determined to escape. While trying to unravel the secrets behind the disappearance of the dwarves, they run into even bigger mysteries. Can they defeat the black dragon (or even find it) and clear the zone? Or will they succumb to all the dark forces working against them?
     
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