I'm not on drugs! I was going to ask you about Royal Road but for some reason I got it into my head that I just imagined seeing your name over there when I set up my account. Would you recommend it as a proofing resource?
Not as good as a paid editor or a good group of dedicated beta-readers but not bad? Heh. Non-committal enough for ya? I wasn't planning on doing it, but I figured why not. Gets me moving again. And feedback hopefully. If you're brand new, I would definitely recommend RRL. Chapter 4 - Sarah - The Great Liger Side-Quest Chapter 5 – Eric – Why Won’t Anyone Join Party?
Skipping chapters is crazy. Had a comment or two one Headshot that went along the lines of "is this stuff with Lori (ex-girlfriend) important or can I skip it?" Um... No you can't skip it. I wrote it because it informs the story, damn it. I suppose I can chalk it up to guys wanting to read about guys, which bodes well for Headshot #2 (MC is female). Sigh...
Chapter 10 – Eric – The Return of the Dwarves Chapter 11 – Sarah – Formerly Four Towers Future Chapter 12 – Sarah – Herb the Stone Giant Chapter 13 – Eric – Revenge of the Hill Giants Chapter 14 – Eric - A Giant by Any Other Name
Chapter 15 – Sarah – A Game Within a Game Chapter 16 – Sarah - Dream a Little Nightmare... Chapter 17 – Eric - Standard Troglodyte Infestation
Chapter 20 - Eric - Feats of Dwarven Engineering 7/19/2017, 6:21:02 AM 4,279 57 - Chapter 21 - Eric - Wight Mage, Glitches 7/20/2017, 1:41:25 AM 4,643 37 - Chapter 22 - Sarah - Blame a Black Dragon 7/20/2017, 3:56:51 AM 3,738 68 - Chapter 23 - Eric - Remember the Worm! 7/20/2017, 7:22:49 AM 4,907 90 - Chapter 24 - Sarah - Not So Wonderful Wand 7/22/2017, 8:33:48 AM 3,237 53 - Chapter 25 - Eric - Dark Knight Seeks Asylum 7/23/2017, 12:21:03 AM 3,485 11 -
