WIP Incipere Online

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  1. CheshirePhoenix

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    Dude, SPOILERS.

    Gawd.
     
  2. Gryphon

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    Oh, I could do a lot worse at this point. Besides, he's already mentioned his sister.
     
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    Off to the editors!
     
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    Probably one of the more emotional section openings that I've had the pleasure of writing. Everyone give Emily Queen a warm welcome as Fragment continues!

     
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    Book three is going a lot slower than I'd like. Sigh.
     
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    So how well has your series done?
     
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    Define your definition of well and I’ll elaborats.
     
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    Entry from the part one seperation of Login Recoded. Chapters should be going up soon on Wattpad. It's over 70k now... so much for a novella:

    Application Processing…
    Auxiliary Support 42 (Tril) on Duty
    October 18th, 2049 - 6:35PM EST

    Subject: Jordan River Rohandal
    Age: 20
    Positive Quantifiers: loyalty, determination, mental and physical strength
    Negative Quantifiers: Anger
    Reason for Application: The subject believes that they are in a position that they would progress in their life far better in Incipere than to continue on Earth in their current situation.
    Underlying Reason: Disassociation with the subject’s current life and situation. The subject has no confidence in the security and laws provided by Earth. The subject deeply believes that the only way to continue is to gain a strength that they cannot gain on Earth.
    Testing Results: 74% Compatibility
    Unum: Rejected for possibility of violence
    Rani: Accepted
    AS42: Accepted
    Rejection Overridden
    Preloading for name and body has been optioned and accepted.
    Subject will be notified of their acceptance.

    ***

    Subject: Daniel Rior
    Age: 22
    Positive Quantifiers: Intelligence, empathy, loyalty, mental strength
    Negative Quantifiers: None displayed
    Reason for Application: The subject is bored with their normal life and believes things would be more fun in Incipere.
    Underlying Reason: The subject deeply fears what may happen to their friend if left alone. In addition to this, the subject does genuinely seem bored with Earth and had been considering Login for more than a few months.
    Testing Results: 96% Compatibility
    Unum: Accepted
    Rani: Accepted
    AS42: Accepted
    Preloading for name and body has been optioned and accepted.
    Landing area has been preauthorized - Auxi 42
    Subject will be notified of their acceptance.
     
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    Login Re:Coded is working towards its final goal with plenty of rewrites and additions. Should top out at around 80k. I can honestly say this has gotten out of control. @CheshirePhoenix I hate that you're right about my writing speed.

    Damnit.
     
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    It's the fiddleitis.
     
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    So, I'm sitting at 3.77 on Goodreads and Amazon... any suggestions on how to make a push to get people to review that have bought/read it? I really want to be 4.0 or higher before the second book is ready to go.
     




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