WIP Office Wars: Lab Coats Optional (Episode 3)

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  1. James G Patton

    James G Patton Horrific Pun Master LitRPG Author Citizen

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    Not sure what date this was planned.

    I have maybe 20-30k words already done with this. Will post counts going forward from this point.

    8/5 Organize the story in Scrivener and start writing.
     
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    Everyone is so motivated here! Luvin' it!
     
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    write faster!

    *a whip pops out of nowhere into her hands*
     
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  4. DJ Schinhofen

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    Can't threaten people with a good time....
     
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    No kidding, did you not read the second Office Wars? That may or may not have been a personal fantasy of mine. Some call it rapey, I call it hot!
     
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    Jee, I wonder who called it rapey : P
     
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    I did, which is why I decided to not post the gif, if you want visual aids you'll have to earn them ;)

    now, less net surfing and more writing!!!!!

    P.S. Rapey? I'd call what you put in there hannibal lecter meets Rihanna (she's still in her S & M phase right?)
     
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  8. James G Patton

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    Haha, a reviewer called it rapey but was uncomfortable talking about it. It was funny. And visual aids eh...? What does one need to do to earn a visual aid?
     
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    I know. I'm feeling so unmotivated, too. August hot, mugginess. It's killer.
     
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    Kind of curious myself as well.
     
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    8/8 4k ish words. Was kind of a blah day, and I have a pinched nerve, which makes it really hard to concentrate on my story haha. Pretty sure half this won't get used, because my MC was NOT happy go lucky, he was kind of a dick. Evil Bran emerges...
     
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    Woohoo for Evil Bran!
    Been there before, hope ya feel better soon
     
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    *eyes your newly made wheelchair speculatively* EZ FIX SHOW WRITERS

    er, we are talking about GoT, right?
     
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    Haha, not that Bran. My main MC is Bran, at least outside of the game. Inside of the game his name is Onion
     
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    Ah ok, I have yet to read your book. But it fits!! It so fits!
     
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    Looks at the above sentence.

    Glances at the personality that is a jokester.

    "Stand down, it's just too easy"

    "Bran Mc Muffin..."

    **Smack** "No!"

    Sorry...Sometimes the Alt's just get a bit out of hand.
     
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    See, sometimes the jokes just write themselves. I am not the writer, I'm just along for the ride...
     
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    Crap! Cerebus the Aardvark! Bran Mac Muffin! Thought that was familiar.

    I now have to beat an Alt.
     
  19. James G Patton

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    I think this is Office Wars 3 cover, I can't change the typeset at this point since I've used it for the last two, but I love my little Spider-Goats, they are awesome.
     
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    Oh and for anyone interested. I finished my big edit on this book, sending it out to a few people to read, and then doing some polish, so its so f'n close to done. And this will end the series. I thought about doing more, but it gets hard to maintain that humor book after book. However, there are plenty of scenes in this one that had me laughing out loud. So so so close to done.
     




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