WIP Rise of the Crimson Kingdom

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  1. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    Oh man my uncle had that on tape. He played that for me once on a trip and I remember laughing so hard.
     
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  2. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    8/5 Words: 2,456
    Total Words: 43,706
     
  3. Tom Gallier

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    You write more words on your days off, than most writers put down in a week. Good job.
     
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  4. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    Thanks! I think it is because I am excited to get this book done. I still have a bit to go. If I can work it right I can get this first draft done by this coming Sunday.
     
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  5. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    8/6 Words: 9,908
    Total Words: 53,615

    My brain hurts. I don't look forward to editing this thing.
     
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  6. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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  7. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    I have reached the point where I need to go back and start rewriting and editing the manuscript to make sure everything works before I write the last few chapters. This is one of my favorite parts and when it's done I'll be invigorated to create the ending.
     
  8. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    8/9: Words 1,693 and did rewrites to make the story flow better.
    8/10 Words 7,883
    Total Words (after some deletions): 68,769

    I'm almost done. After an epilogue and one sex scene I will have a completed rough draft. Then the worrying about rewrites and "is this story good enough and what people want" portion of the process begins! Yay!
     
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    Congrats! Don't worry about what the people want. No! What the people was is.... um.....is.... Okay, maybe you should worry about what the people want, at least a little.

    I'm not being helpful at all, am I? ;)
     
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  10. Alara Branwen

    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    Haha no, but you're being fun. That's what counts.

    8/11 Words: 3,298
    Total Words: 72,067

    AAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNND DONE! Now I get to go back and look for all of the inconsistencies and insert game stats. I may start doing that today but for now I am going to take a break. The last scene I wrote took forever, but sex scenes always take a lot longer. Some days I seriously consider doing a non-erotic LitRPG.
     
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    Grats! Always good feels.
     
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    Jood Gob!
     
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    Thanks man! I really have appreciated the support.
     
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    Alara Branwen Level 11 (Thief) LitRPG Author Citizen Aspiring Writer

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    Thank you for your support Paul and thank you for starting this amazing forum.

    I would also like to thank everyone else who posted. This book should be out eventually.
     
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    I did it for the xp! ;)
     
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