WIP Roguelike: Tower of Gates Supplement Adventure

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  1. Paul Bellow

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    Okay... I think I may brand the standalone series as Tower of Gates Supplemental Adventures. Too dorky even for LitRPG?

    Some great stuff in this short book. It'll make a good entrance into the main series and pull in a lot of Roguelike fans, I hope.

    I'm thinking about redoing the cover. Not sure if I lost my original designer or not. Maybe @Viergacht can help? PM me, please!

    That's about it for now. Roguelike (first standalone or supplemental) will be launched after book 3, but I wanted to peek at it today.
     
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    Latest blurbity-blurb...


    Barbarian Seeks Amulet of Yendro


    Player Alex Fort is stuck on a solo-run in a roguelike embedded in the Tower of Gates VRMMORPG. If he makes it out, he’ll be able to rejoin the other players in ToG. The risks and rewards are both great, which is why he made the decision to try to go it on his own. Was it his biggest mistake or will playing the roguelike bring him even further riches and glory? Find out in this first standalone adventure in the Tower of Gates universe.

    If you loved Rogue, Nethack, or any of the other procedurally generated RPGs, this is the novel for you. Even if you’re not a gamer, the fantasy story and characters will keep you entertained. Either way, I hope you enjoy this new installment in the Tower of Gates Universe! YASD! Aaargh!

    I kinda hate it so far, but it's a work in progress...
     
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    The humor is strong in this one...
     
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    Death cannot be stoned.

    That is all.

    [​IMG]
     
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    elvencookies.JPG

    Elvish cookies! lol
     
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    One more read-through and adding about 2k to 4k words.
     
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    Roguelike


    Seeking the Amulet of Yendro


    Player Alex Fort is stuck on a solo-run in a roguelike embedded in the Tower of Gates VRMMORPG. If he makes it out, he’ll be able to rejoin the other players in ToG along with an epic unique magic item.


    Was taking the chance and going into the roguelike easter egg his biggest mistake? Or will playing bring him even further riches and glory? Find out in this first supplement adventure in the Tower of Gates universe.


    <i>YASD! Aaargh! If you loved Rogue, Nethack, or any of the other procedurally generated RPGs, you might want to check this out. Enjoy this new installment in the Tower of Gates Universe! </i>
     
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    Writing the FINAL CHAPTER...
     
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    Sent to dev editor tonight.
     
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    Got first editor notes. Gonna let this one sit a while and gestate before I tackle the changes. Needs some heavy alterations to get it to the level I want while maintaining the feel of a roguelike as best I can...
     
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    Still not sure what I'm going to do with this mess. Heh.

    Might try to cut it down and use as a short story/novella?

    Because I wanted to capture the spirit of a roguelike, I ended up with a lot of telling over showing. Still might work, but I'm letting it sit for a bit.
     
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    Still editing this one. I should try to merge this and the other thread for this book. It confused me tonight too. Heh.
     
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    This went to the final editor today. Planning on dropping it roughly 3 weeks from now...
     
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    Some final touches on the Roguelike cover. I removed the tentacles and gave the red / orange of the shield a bit more vibrance. Also got rid of the undead looking head and replaced it with a helmet. Even if it doesn't quite fit the rest of the armor, it's a roguelike where you're picking up whatever to grind to lower levels. I used Photoshop magic for the touchups. Better?

    roguelikeevolutionsmall.jpg
     
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    You got rid of tentacles? I still see things that look like tentacles.
     
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    Correction: a tentacle. ;)

    I like something on the sides to have the dungeon-closing-in-on-ya feel...

    I dunno. Still time to change my mind.
     
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    You could change the hero into a woman if you wanted to do a quick genre-pivot.
     
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    Or change the hero into a sentient tentacle? ;)
     




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