Steam Whistle Alley nearly ready for Beta

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  1. Joshua Mason

    Joshua Mason Steam Whistle Alley LitRPG Author Beta Reader Citizen

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    @Beta Reader
    Hello. I'm about a week out from finishing the first draft of Steam Whistle Alley, with probably another week of edits/fine tuning.

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    You can read the blurb at www.steamwhistlealley.com, but that's a WIP as well so feel free to offer some advice on that. You can also sign up for my mailing list there. Anyway if you're interested, leave me a message on the website, or here. It's my first book, so you might need a whole pack of red pens, but the grammar is fairly on point and the early RR reviews (all four of them :p) have been good. It's the third in a series, and I'm actually making an outline for SWA: Second Gear, which is something I didn't do with this one, just pantsed it.

    Thanks in advance, and I look forward to working with you.
     

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  2. Robert Medmenham

    Robert Medmenham Level 7 (Cutpurse) LitRPG Author Citizen

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    Love that new cover, I want those glasses!

    Unfortunately I'm snowed under with RL work so can't volunteer to beta read, but good luck with it.
     
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    Dragovian Over-enthusiastic Tank wtb Pocket Healer LitRPG Author Beta Reader Citizen

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    Oh, now that looks intriguing! I love the steampunk aesthetic.

    Your blurb looked pretty clean, to me.
     
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