WIP Hate: Tower of Gates Book Two

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  1. Paul Bellow

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    versus book one

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    +500 words

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    chap 21 of 26
     
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    (yeah, i added a necessary chapter as things wrap up here at the end...)
     
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    fun scene!

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    ()xxxx[:::: WFTD ::::>

    • 5/30/17 - 2,600 words (Your word count SCRATCHES the novel.)
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    +1200 words

    67,300 words

    chap 22 of 27
     
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    lol i'm so frazzled this week...

    another hour spent talking to FB and more time spent talking to host and a service provider who screwed up my order.

    fun, fun! lol thanks
     
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    the final scenes of the book are coming out well... back to it in a bit...
     
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    I so want to give out some spoilers. Will be interesting to see what the beta-readers think.
     
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    Well, the first book was pretty rocking by the end.
     
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    Thanks.

    Yeah, I should've named Human --> GRIND...is that giving too much away? Haha.

    It builds well throughout the book, I think, with an explosive ending and preview of book three.

    Some teases for the first ToG standalone (Roguelike) that I want to get out soon too.
     
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    Serious, though, thanks. It's nice to have this place (and you people) as a back-up in this big, bad game-world we find ourselves in. ;)

    Back to it! At Speed-of-Frog!

    [​IMG]
     
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    I'm still wondering if I should be worried about seeing nameplates over various real world items. Or the system notifications.
     
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