WIP Incipere Online

Discussion in 'Works in Progress' started by Gryphon, Jan 26, 2018.

  1. Gryphon

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    Then I'll have to give it a try once I finish reworking Book ones finer edits. Gotta get a rougher skin eventually, right? Thanks for the advice, Yuli.
     
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    Why would the average raise with more reviews? Has the book been revised to correct for reviewer complaints?
     
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    For the basic ones missed in editing like grammar, I believe the answer is yes. As for story ones, those are matters of preference that don't necessarily need fixed.

    As for reviews raising, I should have chosen more specific terms. I'd like to try to get some more reviews under my belt to help more people find the story to at least give it a shot. Many people won't give a story a shot without X reviews or X stars, so that why I've been doing some research on the subject of turning over more readers into reviewers. With more, it would be a more accurate picture of is this a 3 or a 4 (many peoples cut off threshold according to what I've been reading on other sites). In turn, I would be hoping for a rise in score rather than a fall.
     
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    I totally get the desire for more reviews. I would have considered 30 enough, though, both to provide social proof and a decent representative sample size.
     
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    Maybe, but when I see ones with hundreds or more, it feels small. The percentage is also much lower than I'd like from the number of sales.
     
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    Book two's art is commissioned.
    Ten chapters left to double check for simple fixes before sending it off to an editor.

    Steaming ahead to book three/four!
    Seems the series will be closer to eight than five at this rate...
     
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    Teacher strike delayed my work. Totally worth it to see my own pay raise die though.
     
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    Cover Art is finished for Re:Coded, Amazing V work as always.

    Time to get to work on Hacked.
     
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    That tends to happen a lot, Alpha World was meant to be a trilogy DJ is now working on book 8 XD keep at it though i really wanna read the second book :D
     
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    Well, book two had to be split into two books. I'm worried that what is now book four might have to be as well since it's focusing on his younger sister, Athos himself, and Rani.
     
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    Book two is back, baby!
     
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