Labyrinth World

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  1. Mister Bill

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    I liked it pretty well. I read it on KU and probably will again next month. It’s more brutal than the usual Chaos Seeds book but is about on par (or better) than book 6, IMO.
     
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    Its a weak start storywise, not a lot of character interactions. The system is well crafted though.
     
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    What happened to you brother?
    Do you need help? We are the chosen ones call upon us and we will come!
    Why do you sound so detached.. without emotion..

    You know the answer to your own question about the book. Compared to the dog $hit thats out there this is the best book that you can read today.
    Now despite that.. some part were a bit too long(this is a different type litrpg).. but same as any Aks books..
     
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  4. Johan

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    So it was pretty good. I am glad I gave it a read. Having only previously read the prologue before, it wasn't what I thought it was. Dragon is right about character interaction, but most died so oh well. One can definitely tell the two MC from the story lines are brothers. It reminds me of a storyline that is quickly heading to a spefic point, and the author assumes readers know what is going on litrpg wise.
     
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    They aren't brothers, the guy from God's Eye is Ricters uncle
     
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    Ah yes I see that now, kinda slipped over it as I also slipped over chapter one (and apparently some of chapter 2). Well that makes it even more clear in a way. Richter get lots of sayings and live lessons from his uncle.
     
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