YOUR COVER IS BAD AND YOU SHOULD FEEL BAD11!!!!!1!1!1!1!1!~11! Insincere mockery, as requested! I'd offer genuine advice except everything I could say has already been brought up. And I'll second the "it's better than I could do" since I'm one of those guys who can't even draw a straight line with the aid of a ruler and graph paper. One thing though; don't worry about the title. If your title fits your book it's better than trying to change it just because someone else has something similar.