Open Call for Beta Readers

Discussion in 'Works in Progress' started by Paul Bellow, May 25, 2017.

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    Mind telling me what you changed?
     
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    In short, a lot of streamlining, clarity issues, details additions, and status update message updates. Saying it now, it seems like I'm asking for a bit much.
     
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    I'm happy to help -- but I'm super busy and it might take a while -- maybe nothing before this weekend? Let me know if that's okay with you.
     
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    That's fine! I really appreciate it. Maybe send it over Friday?
     
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    Sure! :)
     
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    Hey all, I'm looking for new beta / alpha readers. I'm looking mostly for pacing, detail, description, scene and story issues.

    I haven't finished the book yet, about 1/3rd of the way into it, and havent edited yet. While I would appreciate feedback on that end, I tend to edit after I finish the first complete draft and don't want to lose the advice, or forget it.

    I would love some help and appreciate this so much!
     




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