So I had to create my own paperback cover. Feedback?

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  1. Joshua Mason

    Joshua Mason Steam Whistle Alley LitRPG Author Beta Reader Citizen

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    Heya. So my cover artist is on vacation until JULY and I had to do my own paperback cover. Looking for some feedback. I followed all ingram spark recs as far as buffer zones, etc go. How's it look?

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    Joshua Mason, Jun 12, 2018
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    I really, really like it.
    My only concern is that the cover artist's name looks like a different font.
     
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    Looks really good!
     
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    Looking good! Great job!
     
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    Looks good to me! Distinctive and the colors show a nice contrast.
     
    Jay, Jun 12, 2018
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    Looks good to me! Distinctive and the colors show a nice contrast.
     
    Jay, Jun 12, 2018
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    Excellent work! My only crit would possibly be to slightly darken the lower gray half, to make the title stand out a bit.
     
    Viergacht, Jun 13, 2018
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